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Old 11-22-03, 10:16 PM   #10
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From: E-Dub
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Verse 112....god man ur verse was bad even for a 1987 freestyle from vanilla ice....not trying to hate but ur rhymescheme barely existed....I saw no punchlines..well I saw attempted punches but they weren't hard at all...like really weak fillers...nothing stood out at all...u need to improve a lot

Dek81....ur first line didn't even make sense...you said he noshowed the battle...but you posted second? lol but just by reading ur first 4 lines I knew that you won...it didn't seem like u tried to hard (and if you did then you need to improve also) the firewall line was the only one I really liked...the rest was just enough to beat him....

vote- Dek81
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