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For a no0b (sorry, just goin' by your post count..l0l) tghis is pretty damn good...
You flow is dope..you have alot of good, structured and well played internals in here..bars like:
"Mind filled with hate, pictures of the light are skippen
Fingers itchen, Stains of blood forever sticken" - that shit is tight dawg...
Your stanza's were structred well...good bar length.
Your vocab was nice..you didn't go over the top and you didn't undersuceed...also youn refrained from rhyming just 3 letetr words and shit, you rhymes were nice and complex, but at the same time they were easy to understand..dope...
The hook itself was dope..it related well to the rest of the verse..nice 4 line length, and you used good internals here as well.
3/5 - it was dope...look forward to seeing alot more shit like this from you..keep spittin' dawg.
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