dope
imagery was amazing really adds so much to a piece like this
gives everything a personality and therefore enhances the story for the reader
couldnt find any flaws..except the end was perhaps a bit predictable
th best bit for me was probably when he was commiting suicide...(sounds kinda wierd i know)
in terms of the story it was the central piece and was really vivid and the descriptiveness of the blade and his 'fight' with it was really well done
imagery was in abundance thruout the whole piece and made it a pleasure to read
props...thats actually kind of inspired me to write again..