pretty good
emotion and feeling were the force behind this...
simple but simplicity is best for these types of pieces imo
and also its an audio piece
the bars were easy to read and the whole verse was easy to follow
your own take on a played topic.,,,but everyone has a different angle at this shit
cant really say there was any quotobale lines but it held my interest sufficoiently thruout which is what a piece shud do