in the bustling city streets he hustled to make ends meet
cold days defined by feet, a measure of his fortunes in a daily repeat
but he remained upbeat for this withered man had powers
as he shined shoes by the hour the black soles flowered
and seeded images so horrific and explicit he wished he was a coward…

Damn nice and cathy intro with a nice vocab and a good flow = )
The rest was pretty nice put together and well explained , with some nice aspects in it, combined with a good vocab and nice flow , shud be a dope audio..

he saw a homeless man begging for his life
the pot of pennies he clutched dropped in fright
the silhouette of a knife put fear in his eyes
his dirty stubbly face cried as the cold steel slit his side
and glided inside then again and again till blood raged
and the grinning blade laughed at the corpses stage
not afraid to rid the streets of pityful filth and futility
a brutal murder restoring the city to tranquility

Olso the kinda story tellin twist to the piece was dope, ..i kept readin and when it ended i wanted more lol..very catchy very nice topic , good executed and ..a nice read..

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