Emotional, Deep, excellent peice.
Felt it real bad.
I know there is possibly nothing i can say ot make matters better, but i can say that this peice was written very very well. When it sounds good in writing, it will sound excellent on audio. Make sure you post it on the site or something. Vocab was good, way to stay with it, and nice use of flow, it was good.
Overall-9/10...

1 point reducted cuz i wasnt really feelin the chorus, but it was still good