The flow to this was.. amazing. Every piece of this flowed beautifully. I love it.

~Hold us up till we break
Our relationship is full of-give and take
I will try not to talk to you
Coz every time I do…we always seem to argue~

^Nicely written, and I love how you incorporated it TWICE. It just made you feel it so much more after it was engraved into the piece that many times. It just shows that that is the feeling you felt the most by the repetition of it.

Im not burned or scared but I have learned from my mishaps
Never to assign trust to persons if they decline trust you back

^Very well written once again, with a great message behind them..

Overall this piece flowed well, had great emotion, and was seemingly flawless. Nice piece, keep 'em comin, ma.

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