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Beyond words... wow.. let me try though..
Emotion.. obviously flawless. Seems you got out what you wanted to.
Flow.. very good.. structure was pretty good too.. some lines seemed a bit long, but otherwise good.
Vocabulary was perfect. Your uses of the words just.. added to this. Nice ass job.. keep 'em comin.
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