Hm... I liked this. On a technical level, the lines were long, possibly too long. And at times the rhymes and even flow seemed slightly forced. But aside from that, it's good.

As for the content... well... I don't know how someone can't relate to it. I can relate to it, LadySage can relate to it, everyone else should too. We all want to be remembered in some way, we all want to know where we go when we die, and we all want to know how it is we're going to die.

Much respect for being able to express it too. I've tried writing peices like this, but they all end up like shit. This certainly aint shit.

~Irenic~

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Originally posted by Bruklor Nec is just dumb

I'm taking that as a compliment.