aight...


this was a solid read....

flow-structure and all was normal no real dumb shit....multi's were not forced and put together in a concise fashion....liked it

concept-truth....well....i can say this is lackin a bit creativity....u coulda thrown in some twists and stray away from the normality that all "truth" works imply. but u kept the concept going from beginning to end without losing focus...good

lyrically- hmm...solid vocab...was nice and complex and quite thought provoking...<<spelling?.....anyway...this was a coo piece....there is room for improvement on the creative side but the meat of the process is there...keep it up