eh

this was a task to read you forced me to pay attention with all the analogies and shit lol good shit though

bombardment of vocab you should watch that as you know nearly 70% of RB are illiterate and ignorant

structure was ok but shot at some points

topic meh

nice imagery

multies flowed nice not forced so that is good

all in all this was a good read room for improvement i think so indeed, i dont know about "topically untouchable" though lol