this was aight...^im not gonna say flawless like these guys..just honesty


flow-hmm...the structure was kinda sloppy...shit went off with a long bar followed by a short...had to rethink my strategy when reading....then i came up with a good flow...like the multi use...coo

concept-yeah...i just wrote something similar but with a completely different plot...so i liked it..haha....u spiced it up kinda sweetlike by throwin in all the rappers and industry status...really liked it.....u stayed with it and it came out pretty good

lyrically-this was kinda bumpy...it would get hot and complex to basic and kinda frail...overall lyrically it was solid..it evened up to normal status in my book and nothing really spectacular....

overall-good...concept nice....good focus on the topic and it ended up flowin nice.....peace


yo word-----can u please reply with constructive shit on my open mic in my sig???
i need good shit not just "hot" or "wack"...and i wanna join an open mic crew if u can mention my name anywhere if u like my shit aight.....peace...thanx