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Flyweight
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Yo, Keep up the good work man...All and all this was a tight piece, it needs a little work in some areas tho. I felt it was hard to read in some areas, The fact that you used the 'rap names' in your rhyme was tight but you shouldn't have used as many because it kinda fell off a little bit at the end. I really like your concept used, but like everyone says 'no ideas origional'. Seriously tho, good work and I look forward to reading more....
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