"bombardment of vocab you should watch that as you know nearly 70% of RB are illiterate and ignorant".....thought that line was funny but I guess I will get to the point.....

I really like the way you expressed you point with your use of words but I think the phrases were a little too lengthy, if you break them up a little more, it might be an easier read on the eyes..."learned their tendencies, learned the fact that they aint even enemies///
learned thier ways of walk only cuz they learned to respect me///
wantin to attack from behing..not knowin they overlapped my footsteps///" those lines were really well done, "thinkin im back home..but my physical form just conquered an inner demon///
satan's losin hold..every pad i rage on enemies is an evil releasin///" i like the in depth way you express your ideas...keep writin playa