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Old 11-24-03, 01:53 AM   #4
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but this was ok....you need to work on structure a bit though, you should try to make your lines about the same length,...the flow was ok could use more multies and internals in this though to help the flow out...overall this was ok, keep elevating though...keep at it and keep dropping.
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