pretty good drop kid
flow was decent in most parts..perhaps the sentences were a little stretched in places...
vocabulary was decent and kept it from getting too simple
some nice metaphors...enhanced the piece
liked the twist at the end of looking at the mirror...a good twist always improves a read
cos it may have been shit until the end when u get taken by surprise
played topic...but everyone has a different story to tell on these type of things
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