hmm...


flow-work on the structure...the structure was not good which took away from the quality of your multi's...just work on putting the verse together and u shall be fine...


concept- eh...influence ey....i think it fell off topic at times...but thats me...maybe u wrote something personal that other people wont understand...just a little work and focus....aight tough

lyrically-this was kinda basic...u came with the same super-lyrical shit that a lot of emcees tryna be serious come with...u know what i mean? anyway...work on creativity and complexity....eventually words will flow in easier for u....

overall this was kinda aight...not too good or too bad...good for noob....keep it up..thanx for the remarks on my shit....late...