Your use of a romantic writting style was greatly felt in this peice. It added a classic yet spunky feel to the read, as well as matched your tone. Elequently written the verbage flowed off the toungue as in many classic poems. You obviously have a grasp on the romantic realm of writting, and it shows here. I wonder who inspireed your style most, I see hints of many great artisit here. I like your imagery, you place our thoguhts there with you and painted a vision in our minds. Female in prespective and masculine in body, was what struck me.

In a traditonal sense not many RB poets can or have pulled this type of drop off. You did well Mija, your talent stands out!

Much respect

I look forward to more of your work.

Have a blessed day,

~Bounce-Dawg-E-Dawg~

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