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Old 11-24-03, 09:02 PM   #14
M_80
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YO....on da real i think this was a nice piece da rhyme scheme was poetic and and it was on point wit da feeling that it expressed...yo on da real homie i felt ur pain cuz i ve been there too so this piece came direct so on da real i think it was ill....nice work

illest line in this piece: Maybe I shouldn’t have took you for granted, face it I died-
When I asked you to forgive me, and you stated “Goodbye”-
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