this all in all was a very decent read..I dont mind reading
anyones piece..its not hard....deacon calisto emotion...
favorite to least favorite but all good writtens

calisto you always seem to get a little more sharper with
your vocabluary and imagery and you no longer need
my assistance..you can write pretty damn well on
your own..please never stop writing with your heart

deacon you made me think I was reading lyrics from
aesop for a minute with somethign different from a
babys standpoint and your whole verse didnt fall
off at any point...this was done excpetionally well

emotion you droped some knowledge well as the pro
choice individual on this collaboration and got your point
across very well...I thought your last part wasnt needed
but it was good anyway and it wasnt mine..well done

once again another good collaboration by us...