Thread: Ape .vs. Neal
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Old 11-24-03, 10:32 PM   #8
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Yo name is ape then u belong in da zoo/
I can't believe I'm wasting my time battling u/
When battling me u betta use common sense/
'fore i hit u in da jaw having u mumbling like 50 cent/
Your Avatars the closest you done got to a dime/
You "Michael Jackson" lil boys the rest of the time/
U a pitiful excuse for New York representer/
I'll kick you back to the Congo wit da rest of the Guerrillas/
Im bout to go buy yo mama mink/
In rememberance of her son Ape who now is extinct/


flow...6
punches...4
wordplay..4
multies..3
structure...6
vocab...5
overall..28

Ehh, here, nothing special...

You Bust more Heads with ya lip than I do with my clip/
Ya shouldnt-a been John instead-a Neal, because you full of shit/
I sun you so bad ya only Punches ya got is Capri drinks/
Ya verse is so Gay, I think I should slap ya with Elton John links/
Take ya skull of ya sholders, then thats the only time you a-head/
The only time peeps call ya name is at Church, to prey you stay dead/ (Understand?...Neal, Kneel)
You get killed in the Front Lines quicker than Marines in Iraq/
Make this Pussy Bleed so much people start handing him Tampax/
When ever I look at ya verse it makes me laugh, you made my day/
Hey, if it was never for You, Richard Simmons would never br Gay/


flow...7
punches...7
wordplay..7
multies..6
structure...8
vocab...7
overall..42


APE TOOK THIS WIT EAZE...
both can up ur shit...juss the other kat needz 2 work a lot more...

peace
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