^^damn kid....

i can tell u put alot of emotoin and time ..in this..and reminds me of ME..wen i really get into wat im writing..so i like that therre...

ur flow was good....structure..good....wordplay...WHICH I LOOK AT ...WAS IMPRESSIVE....

OVERALL...LIKE UR WORDPLAY....IMPRESSIVE

very long..but worth the read....

I EXPECIALLY LIKED UR CLOSER..

!->E.ven D.eath I.ncourages T.he H.eart<-!
!->R.ight O.n S.erious E.motions<-!
!->L.ove I.s B.ringin E.veryone R.ight T.o Y.ou<-!
!->S.omeone A.lways M.akes S.ure O.f N.obodies<-!


^^SHOWS ME HARD WORK...

PROPZ KID

KEEP WRITIN MAN...*IMPRESSED*

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