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Old 11-24-03, 11:07 PM   #4
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prisoner-nice flow to it...no forced bullshit at all....good .....creatively it coulda been better....seems like the same old prison type of stuff.....but i still like it lyrically...good job

millionaire-my favorite one....very good creativity and imagery...a lot of lines really stood out....best part of this piece....good everything here...

9-5 worker-the beginning was kinda stale...but it abruptly got much better with the daughter shit and family shit....again good flow and content on this one....

overall--this was a good piece..other than what i said above that wasnt good it was overall nice....thanx for feedback on my shit...late
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