yo man was a good drop. a good approach to but like deva said the vocab coulda maybe been upped a bit but other then that ur flow was down, the emotion was there, u had some imagery to this piece and u had some good structure work here, I also thought ur hook was down. good job bro if u wanted me to rate this I'd say an 8.5 outta 10. keep droppin bro. peace.

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