N if dirty bag had a fukkin name, u defined it

wow that shit was fukkin dope as a mother fukker. my dad just left me and my mom and he is a prick and i could relate to a lot of that. damn dude i dont even know wat to say. that shit kept my jaw to the floor because i absolutely love rhymes with pure substance and that shit was more pure and deep than anythin ive read in a long time really dope drop dude seriously really dope

can i get some feedback

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