I think this was a lil 2 basic, and it sounds/seems like you got the concept from Eminem, cos he rapped about his girl n there probs n u look up2 him, so u decided to do one. Thats cool n all, but if u love her, why u dissin her? I thought some of the lines didn't flow fluently, but it was a good concept trust. I think if you were a lil more imaginative with ya vocab, it would of been a dope piece. No hatin' jus expressin my views, aight. Keep postin'.. Holla Peace

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