Hmm, drum pattern is way off. you should be able to count a steaady 1, 2, 3, 4, 1, 2, 3, 4 with your beats. If you cant you know somethins off. That other sample that comes in is way off. The hook is empty because its just the sample and no drums or anything. It could also use some bass. Keep elevatin homie, you'll get it.

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