Wow, this has madd emotion. I was definitely feelin this. Everything was good on this. The only thing, not too many are gonna respond to yours, dats cause u havent responded to anyone else. The key to it is to respond to more ppl and u should get more responses. But newayz, back to this. I thought it was good. Emotion, flow, structure, everything. Overall good job. Keep it up. Much respect.