Well the story was told well...from start to finish but i've seen this kind of method done before...either by other people or from Nas but u gave it a twist at the end and mixed it up(not a bad move)
the flow was much on point through-out
vocab was here and there, but as i said this was done b4 so nothing stood out for me
and the only weakness here was...it was done already
but as far as everything else it was good not great
so i gave you a 7.5/10


Peace.....
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