yeah it was alright I think that the openings of both verses could have been a little more creative. Next time try to put in some more lyrical words like double-o seven said. But you did put your heart into it . I'll end my reply like this if I had to rate it 0 the worst and 10 the best I'd rate it 8.

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Let God speak for the underground Psalm 49 16-17
16 Do not be overawed when a man grows rich when the splendor of his house increases
17 For he will take no thing with him when he dies, his splendor will not descend with him
18Though while he lived he counted himself blessed - and men praise you when you prosper-
19 He will join the generation of his fathers, who will never see the light of life

20 A man who has riches without understanding is like the beasts that perish