This kinda reminded me of a eminem influnced flow here his(slim shady) of course.
it was pretty basic
not much vocab....its a silly peice to me some lines had me laughing
as far as skill level i wont judge you on this post alone cuz i havent seen any other work from you.
the flow was a bit choppy at the end and towards the begining.
i didnt really felt it it's not my taste but it was good
you get a 4.5/10
next time you post i'll read it.

Peace.....
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