Truth be told man this was like Biggie smalls shit(ready to die) I'm usually pretty casual with my replies but this was seriously good shit. I got chills. One thing I would have changed don't be afraid to start a new line or cut down your lines a little.I know what you mean about people showin up at funerals of people they didn't even come in contact with. That happened at my hs. keep on writing and im going to keep viewing. Good job. oh and rip for your people. hope thingz are better or at least the wound isn't as fresh. sorry for the length pz.

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Let God speak for the underground Psalm 49 16-17
16 Do not be overawed when a man grows rich when the splendor of his house increases
17 For he will take no thing with him when he dies, his splendor will not descend with him
18Though while he lived he counted himself blessed - and men praise you when you prosper-
19 He will join the generation of his fathers, who will never see the light of life

20 A man who has riches without understanding is like the beasts that perish