I enjoyed it and if someone wrote this about me I would definitly get red in the face, but i think it could have a bit more readibility in other words it didn't flow as much as I would of liked. Keep your head up it's good with truth and heart. Oh look at my rhyme
Forever my Homie pz and luv

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Let God speak for the underground Psalm 49 16-17
16 Do not be overawed when a man grows rich when the splendor of his house increases
17 For he will take no thing with him when he dies, his splendor will not descend with him
18Though while he lived he counted himself blessed - and men praise you when you prosper-
19 He will join the generation of his fathers, who will never see the light of life

20 A man who has riches without understanding is like the beasts that perish