rhymes: don't do wat u did wit tha open and close, it just doesn't sound right, plus, up ur game a whole lot...
madman: u need to elevated period, don't use thug flows when u battle...
overall winner: rhymes, although both need a lot of elevation...
hit this up though so it can stop sleepin...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=94171