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Old 11-25-03, 10:37 PM   #2
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i thought this was a decent drop 7-9 out'a ten, you had a good flow scheme some good vocab and nice hard lines, your wordplay was awesome, you really showed potential there an that had everything goin smooth, i found this was a great read...keep it up man
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