ok, here it is:

DEZ

kid thinks hes got dope wordplay... well, i'm not sold
watch me crack his fungus..to prove i break the mold
^^^ aight, more wordplay than punch here 7/10
L's like a post 9/11 dealership.....offering 0% interest
9-15 isnt just a record, its also his average bench press!
^^^nice, decent punch, original 8/10
'gainst Dez hes always less...... like a pint to a gallon
what good'll your e-guns do? i wear an i-vest when im battlin
^^^so-so....creative 6/10
kid your joke, he who says otherwise is nothing but a liar
new-b posts never even have half a dope punch..
theyre all wack..especially the 1liners
^^^broke structure here, decent punch though 7/10

TOTAL: 28/40 (70%)

and.... 1LINER

You could Have a million actors trapped in ya ass~ and stuffed in ya glands
but thats the only way your Raps~ could ever be backed by a popular demand
^^^nice opener, decent punch 8/10
i'm Grab"n a preist to Bless me Right--- so i can grab all ya D/r's and turn there necks RIGHT
so all you got LEFT is the THEFT that would immediatly ~Supress ya Hype''
^^^ok, meaning is questionable, trying too hard here... 5/10
like a glock with out tha light--u could obses me for life
u could copy and spit every word i speack ~twice~and evey breath i breathe~~ and still not do it right
^^^weak punch, learn how to spell dog: speak, every 5/10
You aint evil or see though SO U COULD NEVER Posses these EYES
AND THATS WHY as u predictid ur only gunna be a Texcee for LIFE
^^^ weak punch 6/10 1st line was stupid
You could neva Break this or~Stop-This-Hammer-
from leaveN you face-less --shot in ya grammar --and show u the tru meanin of Race-ist Prop-a-gan-da
whats race gotta do with it? eh.... 5/10

TOTAL: 28/50 (56%) work on structure, but you got potential

vote goes to dez

peace