this was short but sweet... ur flow was on point, you had some hot vocabulary... work on the multi's though....

My open woundz bleed arsenic...Poisonous Fumes engage
Filled with a rage...Spit the blood from my woundz upon the page

I'll find, the way my Sanity'z playin tricks, Cold hits like brickz
Visions of myself bein burnt Joan Of Ark style,on a crusifix

^^^ i loved those lines ^^^

you seem to be hiding the true meaning of something deeper... but nonetheless, this was a very nice piece.... peace

8/10