Thread: Forever My Homie
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Old 11-26-03, 04:52 PM   #6
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this was an okie drop, i think you need a better structure, becuz you hav good word usage and lines it just doesnt sound allforfilled, and ye that girl does have one arm...oood drop my man...keep it up
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