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Old 11-26-03, 05:20 PM   #3
Jaywalk
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Hollllerrrrrrrrrrrrr

not feelin the beat much, first guys flow is a little shakey, delivery is cool, on a commercial tip here, pretty dope...hooks okay. Skeez killin it, like some of the lines, delivery is dope, scheme is sick. pause before prepared to kill is a bit akward. i started looking around like omg whats going on but then u came back on. You improved some, quality sounded weird though for some reason. stop mentioning yao ming in raps, ive received word from tom tolbert that hes working on a diss song to you.
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