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Old 11-26-03, 05:29 PM   #79
Aisle Phive
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I wasn't saying Tonya won, her verse was garbage. But your verse wasn't that great neither. And I got all your punches, they just sucked. No offense, but start peeping some LLL battles or something. We don't use quotations, we don't stretch our lines, we use metas, etc. All of those you should try to work on, your wordplay was sub-par. Punches were weak, flow was the only real good part I saw.
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