Sick of the crucifictions inside of this music business...
That leaves two defendants landed in court, due to a two-bit witness...
Yo those opening lines...ill. I thought I was in store for a nice lil story piece.

A rappers true description is not who they depicted to be...
Fewer listen to the real but base decisions on the convictions of me...
Disappintment. No story. I still kinda like the angle you took on a subject that's gettin' a little played out in and of itself. Conscious rappers bitchin' about commerialism is almost becoming a cliche itself. But your lyricism is pretty dope.

Picture the streets, I paint ghetto pictures, JJ Evans with a mic...
Figure the beef, wasn't left with sciptures an industry with no reverends to save my life...
Yo, I think the flow's nice. You're using a lotta multies, and that makes the flow good I think.

Commercial artists work the hardest....Yea In being fake...
Don't see the mistakes that either will make they souls depleted and raped...
This shit was just a lil short. Would like to see where you go with it when you complete this piece. Ill drop though.