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Old 11-26-03, 07:05 PM   #10
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Amends verse:

This Kids A Joke, Battles Blunder'd - Amend Dont Care For Clouts
Plus, Theres Only 1 Thing I Ever Did With Ties. . .Wear Them Out//
...you obviously dont know the definition of clouts either way wack
So Spare Ya Mouse, Or I'll Drag Ya Click - Kid, Ya Crew Is Boring
I Should Of Saved Time, Absent This - & Have Chrit Do It For Me //
...lol u mentioned chrit meh decent punch not too good
Newbs Snoring, Their Legends Back - & Then This Dudes Ending
& By The Sound Of My Crew - Its Almost Like You Could Be In It//
...did that even rhyme?? not good almost decent

Yung P:

Now Amends's just-in trouble, cuz he couldnt come wit a verse dat wuz "in sync"...
In comparison, ya verse is always gayer den mine... And i'm da one typin in pink!!
...lol not good but funny punch haha
Your on a road to loss or win, and my punches are steerin ya route...
Offered you water for thoughts, and now all three of ya states are experiencing a drought...
...nice punch
Tryna beat a legend but dawg, its hopeless, you wack...
Noticed you slightly changed ur style, but couldnt AMEND da dopeness you lack...
...lol nice personal
Kid ya below average, so why you up in elite frontlines battlin Brixton...
Amendmc: so yea, your here more then me=FACT, AMEND is ill=fiction...
...meh worded very wrongly nice idea though still

vote - p for punches and personals that were present and better verse overall