Nice. Structure was a lil off, kinda mad the flow a lil weird too. I like the concept of it, and this is a good way to get ur thoughts out.

trust, is something imaginary a word which can be broken by most
trouble, never comes in a small dose, only in large quantitys
^these were my fav lines, and yet they are soo true. The two things that im basically happen to me, so i can relate.

Overall good job. Keep it up. respect