Hmmz

The ...concept was nice

Liked these lines the most:

The house was like a fairytale, a sudden Dream Come True,
we'd often Hold Hands together as we went to See The Zoo.
I thought He was Cool. . & back then we'd go play for hours,
on the Acres of grass he owned, or inside that place of ours,

Maybe cause i can relate a little, ..sometimes the flow was off, and went into a poetic direction in my opinion ..but the message in this piece corrected that , ..vocab fitted right into this, and all by all this was a nice read..

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