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Not Bad.......I was feelin the topic and your transition from younger to older........you had decent flow and it was worded quite nicely.......I'm happy to see you took a more respectable and honest route with this this topic.......the chorus tho' I wasn't really feelin that much and it was a little long maybe this just needs to be heard.....and I agree find that special someone and perform it to her.......she would probably melt.......good shit.....keep elevatin and stay up
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