The flow was there.. and the topic was rather interesting, and the way you wrote it just made it even MORE interesting... I really liked this..You could feel some emotion, but the imagery was key.. not that I wanted to be picturing a man shooting himself.. BUT, none the less, I did. LoL. I really liked this piece though... there was just... the imagery and the flow that just got me. Nice ass job. Sorry this was getting slept on.

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