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Old 11-27-03, 09:48 AM   #10
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This was a decent piece......I felt your emotion and the flow was on point but it seemed kind of simple.......you need a little bit more complexity........I agree LM's flowed better but double-0's had slightly better lyrics.......I'm not feelin the chorus at all really........but overall it was a decent piece.......keep elevatin and stay up.......keep doin ya thing
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