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Old 11-27-03, 10:59 AM   #6
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This Was A Very Good Piece Here.. The Multis In It
Were Well Planned With The Flow And Structure Mix.
The Story Was On Point With Your Lyrics. Good Story
Line Also. The Flow Was To The Point Where It Worked
And Didn't Lose The Reader Cuz You Were Tryin
To Hard, So That Was Dope.. Overall This Was A Good
Piece Bro.. Just Keep Steppin Everything Up
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