yo man. only one word to describe this. and that one word is "dope". I was feelin this the whole way through flow was there I thought some decent vocab and multi's and wordplay. rhyme scheme was tight and like always so was ur structure but like Dulce said the hook needs some work but other then that dope shit bro. keep on reppin CV brotha. peace.

forgot to mention about this part

Ya found the perfect woman to love for life until your dead

it may seem like that^ until divorce comes along lol. naw juss kiddin. lol

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