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Old 11-27-03, 04:41 PM   #8
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Yeah i agree this was pretty good....just watch some of the lines length though some of them got a little too long you should try to keep them around the same lenght though to help out the structure and it helps it flow better....but other than that it was a pretty good drop...keep at it.
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